I agree with that statement concerning that the actor playing the time traveler portrayed his lines in a manner of bad timing and displays of emotion are overplayed.
Concept of the film and overall production seems to be put to good measure. The writing is sub-par, the Time Traveler's dialog is quite the deal breaker for this film.
The directing is on the task but the acting seems lost in the writing. I also think the length exceeded the subject-mater and would much rather watch 5 minutes than 10. There wasn't enough to keep me there the entire 10 minutes...
Overall I give a 5 out of 10.
a 2 for acting.
a 3 for writing. (Length was too long for the concept) a 7 for production.
Concept of the film and overall production seems to be put to good measure. The writing is sub-par, the Time Traveler's dialog is quite the deal breaker for this film.
The directing is on the task but the acting seems lost in the writing. I also think the length exceeded the subject-mater and would much rather watch 5 minutes than 10. There wasn't enough to keep me there the entire 10 minutes...
Overall I give a 5 out of 10.
a 2 for acting.
a 3 for writing. (Length was too long for the concept) a 7 for production.