The story is ok, but how it started is absolutely the wrong way:
Spoiler:
the mail box is super full since ages, and the invitation to the party was still valid? what chance is there....
there could have been many other ways to start it that makes a bit more sense.
Spoiler:
the mail box is super full since ages, and the invitation to the party was still valid? what chance is there....
there could have been many other ways to start it that makes a bit more sense.