Need to start somewhere to nake film, and i see they try different lihts and tricks.
It is a ractice film I can see it.
The us stop scene was close to good, I would work just a bit more on that.
The 1914 light blinking reference and settings were good.
Respect for Rambaud and Chaplin, Buster Keaton, great, I can see where they get the ideas from.
But these are still practice.
It is a long way to lear to write script and execute what you want to see on the canvas.
After watch back your work, you should re shoot again until get it better and better, or remains practice video.
This is typical first films what ends in the maker's drawer and they may never watch back ever.
Good for pactice and learn from it, but not good as short film.
The loonacy scenes are terrible.
It is a ractice film I can see it.
The us stop scene was close to good, I would work just a bit more on that.
The 1914 light blinking reference and settings were good.
Respect for Rambaud and Chaplin, Buster Keaton, great, I can see where they get the ideas from.
But these are still practice.
It is a long way to lear to write script and execute what you want to see on the canvas.
After watch back your work, you should re shoot again until get it better and better, or remains practice video.
This is typical first films what ends in the maker's drawer and they may never watch back ever.
Good for pactice and learn from it, but not good as short film.
The loonacy scenes are terrible.